Talk:Press release 2.0.3

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Some very minor suggestions:

>>is ready now for<<

"is now ready for" instead?

>>three months after the release<<

replace "after" with "since"?

>> is also the first office suite<<

remove "also"?


Jeff, as always, thanks for the comments. I agree with two out of three. However, I think the 'also' is worth keeping: strictly speaking, the stuff about ODF is not a feature of this release. However, Louis put it in the first draft and I don't think it does any harm repeating the message. "Also" sort of justifies including it in the PR...

Jpmcc 21:36, 28 June 2006 (CEST)

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