Hardware resources might want to be reworded in the third person rather than the first person. Also, break down requirements for Linux, Windows, and Macs nearby.
The last version of MSO OOo is supposed to be compatible with should be indicated.
I would suggest on the hardware resources to delete the comparison between StarOffice (most people I think will be coming from an MSO background so the StarOffice reference might be lost).
Why no TOC on these pages? It makes it so hard to read! -- AndrewZ 2007-11-09